You’ve got a lot riding on your salespage.
Here's how to make it better so you get more sales

My special Critique and Tweak process will make it more
compelling, urgent, and persuasive, and increase your response rate and sales

You’ve worked over and over creating your product or service. Spent money and time on developing your campaign. And now all comes down to your sales page. You have a lot riding on it.

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In the end, it's up to your salespage to get people to buy

That’s why experienced marketers pay for top copywriters to write their salespage (and/or salesletter video). Paying somewhere from about $7,000 to $12,000 and more. Sometimes adding on commissions to make it even more enticing for the copywriter.

Right now, there’s a new way you can get a topnotch sales page or salesletter video without paying those prices. My Critique and Tweak service for salespages.

I’ve been a top copywriter for decades and written many high-converting sales pages for newsletters, publishers, technology and healthcare companies, as well as for many entrepreneurs. Top publishers have paid me $15,000 plus royalties to write just one salesletter.

I know you don’t want to pay that much. With my Critique & Tweak service you can get my help with your salesletter or sales video at a fraction of the price. .

Here’s how it works:

  1. Send me a description of your product. The key features and benefits. Your main target audience.
  2. If needed, I'll provide you with templates to write a draft of the salesletter (or video script)
  3. Critiques

    I'll give you specific recommendations to increase the effectiveness of the copy

    Write your draft and send it to me.
  4. I will analyze and critique your draft.
  5. I'll write my comments, edits and recommendation on your draft. I’ll also create an audio of my critique and tweaks so you can listen to my comments and suggestions. I’ll explain what works, what doesn’t’ and recommend changes to make it better and more powerful to boost response and sales.
  6. Make your changes and send them back to me.
  7. I will review your tweaks and may suggest additional revisions.

So you get my personal guidance in creating the copy you need. And you’ll boost your chances of getting more sales and more clients.

You can check this page for some testimonials from the businesses I’ve helped with high-converting copy as well as with simple tweaks that have skyrocketed their sales. These include many coaches, consultants, professional service providers and other entrepreneurs.

You see, I not only carefully go over the writing to see whether it’s compelling and persuasive, I also check to see if you’ve added the right emotional elements. I check to see if you have a big idea. If you’ve developed the idea. If you’ve made a convincing, persuasive, compelling case to buy your product.

If not, I’ll make suggestions to help you make it more engaging, persuasive and compelling.

And one critical thing that is often overlooked. Clarity. You see, according to Marketing Experiments, a marketing testing organization that has probably tested more marketing components than any other organization, when it comes to salespages…

Clarity trumps persuasion.

Business owners get so close to their product they often assume things or skip over things or jump from one point to another without realizing that things are not clear to the reader – and that your salesletter does not flow in an understandable order.

And the slightest bit of confusion LOSES the sale.. I’ll make sure you have clarity AND persuasion.

If you’ve got a lot riding on your salespage. If you think it’s worth making it better, then reserve a spot for my critique and tweak.

The fee is only $750 for a complete Critique & Tweak for a salesletter/and or salesletter video script). Compare that to $10,000 or more to hire a top copywriter to write it.

A Critique & Tweak requires personal attention from me. So there are only a limited number of slots available at any time. To reserve a Critique and Tweak just fill out the form below. In the comment section, put the kind of critique you want (e.g. salesletter) and any other comments.

If there is currently no availability I will put you on the waiting list. Otherwise, I will send you an email with a link to payment and instructions to get started.

I look forward to working with you!

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